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Beautiful piece on the ecology of scallop population dynamics. The connection between the 2007 breach and improved eelgrass habitat is fascinating, especially since the mechanism still isn't fully understood. One overlooked angle here is how those byssal thread attachements to eelgrass create a sort of refuge network, the spatial patterning of eelgrass meadows probably matters as much as total coverage when it comes to survivorship thru that vulnerable juvenile stage.

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As I’ve become accustomed to in your writing, the expertise is fabulous.

I might suggest that the narrator’s voice—”I” remain singular rather that occasionally switch to “we”. Keeping that stance, keeps the focus—at least for me.

Check out some of the common punctuation uses of commas, and a few references to antecedents. Nothing overwhelming, but perhaps jarring to former English teachers!!

The px are great, the whole is fine, and the blend of the personal with the scientific explication and descriptions is always a pleasure..

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